PAIN

PAIN

A Poem by DarkestSpirit15
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Darkest times series

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that feeling like your so far lost that you'll never be found again... 
that your knocked to the ground and cant get back up... 
then empty lost soul deep inside you fallen into a cold, dark, lonely hole never to be seen again...
when you start to hear the high pitch screeching surrounding you...
when you feel the claws digging deep into your flesh...
when you see the blood drip from your wounds like a waterfall...
you want to leave but there's no where to go...
you want to die but your already dead, forced to live this horrible hell over and over again...
that never ending pain and loneliness...
you cry and cry and yell for help but there's no one around to hear you...
this is what i feel every day of my life...
i am a that lost soul that no one can find...
i am a broken heart never to be fixed...
just rip my heart from my chest and end this suffering...
take away the constant screeching and never ending pain...
please kill me and save me from all things i thought would never happen...

© 2013 DarkestSpirit15


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Such a broken soul, yet here you show so much life, you show fight, you show light you show what it is deep down beyond our sight. I love how you opened your self up and how you let such truth flow. Do not feel so put aground who knows there might be some happiness to find around.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can really relate to your writings. I have been to those dark places too.
You write your feelings very well



Posted 11 Years Ago


great emotion in the piece. It comes through very clear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a broken soul, yet here you show so much life, you show fight, you show light you show what it is deep down beyond our sight. I love how you opened your self up and how you let such truth flow. Do not feel so put aground who knows there might be some happiness to find around.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DarkestSpirit15
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rhinelander, WI



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