Sunup-Sundown

Just my thoughts.

A beautiful day, 

sunup-sundown,

 A tireing way, 

I hide the frown, 

That always seems, 

to come around,

 On a beautful day,

 sunup-sundown

Author's Note

It is comeing from my mind...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The day shall be repeated. I liked the old wisdom. New day, new opportunity to do something worthwhile and fun. Thank you Taz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sofia]

The repetition is really good and the poem was also lovely. A good job :)

[Taz]

Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.

[Sofia]

You're welcome :)

[Broken Hearts]

I like the repetition; I feel like it's part of what makes this poem as good as it is. Great work.

[Taz]

Thanks, I am really grateful for everyones kind reviews

[Sammie Sanchez]

i like the repetition and such,reminds me of some of my older poems, good work

[Taz]

Thank You.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Simple yet beautiful. Like a cup of coffee. Tyfs!

[Dove]

wow. very simple but yet very true and touching. excellent job.

[Taz]

Thank you very much.

[Stacy Purvis]

Darling poem. Spelling corrections needed; however, it is adorable. Thank you for sharing.

[Taz]

Thank you for pointing out there are spelling mistakes, I literally made this at about 1:00 this morning.

[Surya]

A tireing way, I hide the frown,....
Simple but a good...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very simple and sweet. There should be space between sun up and sun down don't you think ?

[Taz]

you mean between sun and up?

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah......

[Taz]

Ok thank you for your input.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome