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This is a poem for one of my friends.

Hair of fire 

Blue green eyes 

Kindness within 

Your presence lies 

Your song it sings 

A voice of truth 

And everyday 

It helps me through 

I will listen, learn from you 

I yearn to know the things you do 

As I am drawn 

Back to your home 

I will know 

I'm not alone 

For when I see you 

I do hear 

Your truthful music 

Loud and clear 

Because I know that you are true 

With all my soul I do thank you.

Author's Note

This I made for a friend who has helped me so much. I would like some feedback on it before I give it to her.

Reviews

[pia]

This is super cute !! Makes me thankful for having my best friend by my side !!

[Taz]

Thank you, I really hope she will like it.

[Sofia]

It was such a wonderful write! Your friend must be really lucky :) and I'm sure she'll be really happy reading this :)

[Taz]

Thank you so much!

[Sofia]

You're welcome

[CAPOLAVORO]

She should be a one proud friend. This is a god write for her. It's simple yet meaningful in so many ways. :) Well done.

[Taz]

Thank you!

[Rimpi Saikia]

She'd definitely be very glad to read this! It's beautiful!

[Taz]

Awe thanks muchly!

[Stacy Purvis]

She is very lucky, indeed to have someone admire her as much as you do.
Friends are cherished gifts.
Thank you so much for sharing! x

[Taz]

Thanks for reading!

[Cœur]

I'm sure whoever this is for will like it very much ^^The rhymes flow very well and it shows your great admiration. Good work and good luck.

[Taz]

Oh thank goodness, I'm quite nervous really lol. Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

That friend is lucky to have you. Very heart warming. Truly beautifully written.

[Taz]

Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.

[barleygirl]

This is dripping with sincerity & gratitude -- something people often forget to express these days. Any friend would be honored to have someone think of them this way. Your writing is truly a gift that's equal to the caring friend you are describing here. Good rhyme & rhythm, too.

[Taz]

Thank you so much.