Fire

Fire

A Poem by Tazzie
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I was bored so I don't really know

"

The wind brushesh the through her hair as she skips around the lighted fire , crackle , crackle the sound , that destressed her seeing the flames rise.

Orange , red what ever colour they was they certainly looked beautiful rising like a person through out there life.

Thinking that you could get rid of that somthing that easy just by sparking a flame

The smell .... well that was the best the foggy musty smell filled her lungs and she skipped around

She turned to see somthinng she had never seen before  a man stood quite a mile away his yellow jacket shone under the full moon , what did he want?, was he admiring her dancing.

The man started to talk forwards as she stopped prancing around the deviloush fire.

'Hello' Shouted the man a deep cloudy voice.

'Oh no she thought it was those men father had told her about he had come to stop her fun.

'You do kno-' He began to shout but before he could

she turned on her heels turning the ground beneath her alittle bit,'Oy' he shouted but she didnt stop speading like a bullet out of a gun

 

© 2011 Tazzie


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Awesome read, love the imagery and detail.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Tazzie
Tazzie

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Hey its tazzie111316 i really love writting and i've started doing alot of it in my english lessons. The poems (and others) i put on here are just little things i've made to practice my writting skil.. more..

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