Traffic Jam

My thought process in poetic form?

Pushing

Bumping

Interrupting

One starting before the last is through

Too fast for itself

Chaos

Bumper-to-bumper worries and four-thought pile-ups

So many and so little

Speeding

Yet inching along

Stalled

Idling

Going nowhere fast

Author's Note

I'm aware that, grammatically speaking, it should say "so many and so FEW" but I liked it this way.

Reviews

[Kaela Craven]

I think we have similar thought processes. The way you write reminds me of my own thought process, not only in this but in several of your poems.

Nice job.

[Mysty Rayn]

Everyday I go through this. Glad someone wrote it down so well. Haha