Water Dunes

Winds dance upon the waters

Making the waters mirror

Desert sand dunes

Reviews

[A]

Blahh, this one seemed like a bit of a puzzler to me. Probably just me though. The title and the last line, wonderfully put together.

I can't get past the fact that your three line poems seem so much like haiku's. They're great, but they're not haiku's and -brainmelts-

[Sasha]

I agree with Alex. I thought they were supposed to be haikus and quickly realised they weren't. Still, they say quite a bit for such small poems.