--- All At Once ---

--- All At Once ---

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy




All at once, I love you
and I resent you.

Though you do bring a
storm of color to my
gray existence, the end
of you is the sword of
Damocles that menaces
from above my neck.

You are the barb that
has furtively buried
itself in the soft
underbelly of my soul,
which I know must one
day be torn out.

© 2015 Creepy Swine Guy


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The universe insists upon a balance.The poem is beautifully scribed. We are drawn to the beauty of the fire and then we are burned by the flame. I love the imagery especially of the color.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

8 Years Ago

Thank you for visiting. I've been away and hope you are well. I know you were struggling with some ... read more
This is stunning. Simple. Beautiful. Quiet and explicit. There's not much more to say. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by, and for your most gracious review. I am flattered & appreciative

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