Walk With Me

 

Walk with me, on summer shores

where the water laps warmly at

our unprotected toes.

 

Walk with me, through green forests,

still dripping with the fragrance

of cleansing rains.

 

Sit with me, on the front porch

where the climbing sun burns the

morning fog from the valley.

 

Sit with me, on the back porch,

where the blaze orange sun

gently bids us good night.

 

Stay with me. Soothe me with your

soft, gentle words and calming

countenance. Love me.

 

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

What? Lemme read this again....yup, Dani is right. Where did this soft, gentle soul emerge from? Ahhhh, what soothing words, what tender thoughts. The last line brings it all together. What'd I tell ya bout that love thang? Get's ya every time. Love is good. It's verra good, and you just expressed a wonderful, hidden desire for it. :)

[Ferg]

how is it that the self-proclaimed "king of swine" produced this gem of writing? makes me wonder...... how many hidden stairways are there in the kings castle and to what hidden rooms do they lead?
Sarcasm aside, this is a lovely poem full of sincerity and tenderness...simply elegant, every word.

[qaralynn]

great poem..really like it

[deleted]

This is a very comely piece! Your words vividly showed the passion and emotions of love/longing. Excellent read.

[Andrew'sWonderland]

A Beautiful and Emotion Filled Piece!! I love the calm, sweet tone!!

[Nae Nae]

This is very good, short but it seems to show a lot of emotion. Good job!

[TL Boehm]

blissful, dreamy poetry - reminiscent of summers and first loves. Well done.

[Sean Allen]

Nicely done and the picture, which looks a lot like home, adds to the piece.

[Fairy Tales]

lovely poem

[Sorry Infamous]

This was lovely. Just rolls off the tongue. Beautiful job.

[Gheeneil]

I like the solemn mood of the poem. I could sense the persona's contentment and happiness to have someone--a loved one--by his side as he journeys through life. I love the simplicity of this piece.