Lucky 7

The seven deadly sins!

 

Lust

The look of his coffee colored skin

It makes me want to commit this sin

My yearning to touch him is unbearable

I am going to act on impulse…

Gluttony

Shoving food down your throat

When you read her note

Swallowing the sweet cake

As you throw away your life…

Greed

People follow her every command

No matter if there are reprimands

Yes, bow down to her

She will want more…

Sloth

They all walk around with saddened faces

Lazily finishing their races

Wishing the long day was through

Oh, how hard they work…

 

Wrath

The embarrassment he felt was painful

Cheerleaders were disdainful

His anger arose and his eyes were aflame

Revenge was a must, he began the killing…

Envy

She has the perfect shape

No extra weight being held by tape

Don’t you want to be like her?

I can see the jealousy in your eyes…

Pride

Every one of them hurt her

There was no cure

It didn’t matter; she didn’t need them

She was superior and could walk alone…

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and/or incorrect spellings! Tell me what you think :}

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Nice usage of the seven deadly sins. Each stanza was its own little story. Great, original idea.

[jesseseraph]

a lot of thought characterizes this which seems to be your natural element a sense of the intense with a twist of rhyme~

[universalove]

To understand sin of mans rules just to be blind to the true nature of words to free your mind , heart and soul. Good write.

[Winter McPherson]

Very unique and original! The color and beautiful font made it come alive. Excellent!

[Wicahpi]

Interesting title choice for the 7 Deadly sins.
Enjoyed the read :)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Good write- covered all the sins super V

[Poeticpiers]

Seven deadly sins described in verse and with a regular rhyme scheme The only thing it lacks is meter And yet it flows. ivor

[DavidRyan]

This is amazing. I love it a lot. The way you decided to tackle each seven deadly sin is well done. I love how the first part to every one rhymes and then you end with a non-rhyming, strong sentence. Well done. I loved it.

[angelina neves]

delicious! :)

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

I love the idea. I love how you created this, really, it's original, insightful and maybe just brilliant.

Excellent work, love the second stanza...it was....just no words but *sigh*

all my love~

jmm.