meredith's wave

the long wave shimmered slightly

quivering on an oscilloscope

calibrated correctly revealed its 

stunning curves 

to eyes peering through machinery

one hundred thousand million miles away

 

galileo never saw this beauty 

she is fine and shimmies like a flapper

found herself effortlessly in the hearts

of the scientists united

let me speak to the frequency 

in codes mapped out in digital libraries

and i'll ask this:

do you speak in stardust clouds all the time

because I refuse to believe 

you are only a phosphorus green blip

travelling carrier waves

we await your arrival 

pierce our ionosphere deep

you ravage our curiosity

swarm through our transistors

be amplified and ricochet 

we will record you and transmit you

i will name you meredith

she is the last target of my vibes

you remind me of her curves

and she is just as impossibly claimable

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'meredith's wave'
m.s.early,
This was an enticing story relayed in prose.
What a combination of the thrill of scientific
study and discovery. The description of a meeting
of minds searching, looking and then the beauty of
your Meredith's wave. This part was intriguing
. "do you speak in stardust clouds all the time
because I refuse to believe
you are only a phosphorus green blip
travelling carrier waves"
I must admit I was thrilled right along.
I love the heavens too
. They are an unceasing mystery.
Of course the completion revealed that the
vibe of a lady can be just as thrilling and
worth the mysterious experience as this
heavenly one.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Linda alexander]

you are only a phosphorus green blip
travelling carrier waves
you remind me of her curves
and she is just as impossibly claimable
You are lucky that you got that meredith wave through your oscilloscope and it did matched exactly her curves, and impossible claimable, comparing shimmering like a flapper as your lady, reader can visualize the effort you put to catch her in your instrument so perfectly and excitement of your mind when you saw the similarities of meredith wave to her, congrats to poet of galaxy, enjoyed it

[m.s.early]

(: thank you Linda :)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, any time, like the name meredith

[Lyn Anderson]

impossibly claimable. Interesting choice of words.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you kl :)

[Ahena MK]

real good .......
:)
loved it ..
ahena :)

[m.s.early]

(: thank you ahena :)

[s y e]

I love your descriptions, Xavier. :) You always write with so much description you can actually picture the scene, loved it.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you noodle :)

[paddy d daly]

I like how you describe the wave, you build it up to the last four lines which are the key to the poem
for me, the unlocking and the meaning, excellent.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you paddy :)

[skyler]

i like this poem as well the way you describe the beauty and pain in things is very unique

[m.s.early]

that's quite a compliment. thank you very kindly.