Glowing light in dark ----- 1

When love conquers all

 It was a blinder when I was with you,

Serene Atmosphere & our hands were glued,

Slight rain was drizzling adding flames,

We were hugging our lives as argued.

 

Walking & talking briskly in rain,

Tenderness was showering from your eyes,

Our lips was waiting for their turn,

A slight fear in heart still resides.

 

We were playing childishly in rain,

Surmounting smiles & desires,

Your wetness were attracting my wits,

Every drop adding a flavor to fires.

 

We reached our home hugging snugly,

Electricity suddenly failed,

A scream of love generated in silence,

A compassionate hold, you entailed.

 

My hand caress your hairs,

You were shying away with a smile,

Gently I kissed your cheeks,

Even drops were hiding being futile.

 

Your tightness amplified when my lips reached yours,

Your eyes were closed in passion,

Stirring lips created consciousness,

And our act dived in countless iteration.

 

A temperature was raised in winter,

It’s time to taste its warmth reaching skies,

The kingdom of my lips outreached,

The regime of your neck and eyes.

 

You were surrendering yourself,

Participating copiously in this act of ardor,

My lips were still fighting the battle,

Your regime was escalating in adore.

 

Flawless kisses were raining,

Atmosphere turned cozy,

Your whole body was shivering,

In love, passion & glory

 

 

Author's Note

This is part one of a passionate love..............wait for more to come........:-)

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

really so amazing and romantic poem! It`s again like a piece of memory, kept forever in still moment of deep love...It makes reader feel every detail of your emotion! I liked this verse:
Your wetness were attracting my wits,
Every drop adding a flavor to fires
~nia~

[Lost in Wonderland]

You can really feel the love an passion in this poem. It is very well writen. Nice job, you are very passionate. And I like that it didn't go to far. Yo can feel the very human desire, but it stopped with a kiss (or 2). I loe the use of rain. I don't know why but I find rainy days very romantic and poetic. Lovely poem!

[Passion]

Very romantic! I especially love this part:

"Flawless kisses were raining,
Atmosphere turned cozy,
Your whole body was shivering,
In love, passion & glory"

Very well written.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

passionate, indeed. beautifully written, loving write. Can't wait for more. Nicely done.

[Richy Moon]

You can sure get passionate love, but it's kind of.... well, i don't know, bland to me. like you it know but don't feel it. The image just didn't form in my head with this poem :(

[pinpen]

wow such a long write but so beautiful. Like!

[Dominique]

Wow, This is beautiful. I cannot wait for the next part! This was amazing Diwakar keep up the good writing!

[The Flame of the Knight]

Damn. This was very good. No not good. this was amazing.

[Thea]

Your words here flowed greatly...A beautiful piece...Well done!
:)))

As I read your mesmerizing words, I can feel you write here to your true love. Wonderful work, and deep romance.