"Screaming silence – 1"

"Battle without words"

 

In an uncertain boat of dilemma,

The chaos burns into my silence,

That parasitic shrillness has turned ferocious.

 Moments are enigmatically crying grievance.

 

Yet that smile is stubbornly dancing,

In atmosphere of horrific poignant airs,

Fire firing more heat and light,

Life’s belief on heart is in tears.

 

The music sinuous in wave of harmonic pain,

Every note busy in digging its own grave,

 The final epic battle is fiercely waiting for an end,

Just a touch for forever silence, no room for being “Brave”.

 

Winds are painting the solitude canvas,

Trees turned noisy and irritated,

Soul dived under the sea of misunderstandings,

Swiftly a sense of enigma is elated,

 

That silence nurtured the whimper,

Where tempers are lost in subtle war,

A battle of sarcasm & ache,

Wholly equipped with fiery scars.

   

It’s time to end the race with a cremation of time,

Where dignity is dissolved inside fervour of demise,

Endless deeds is disappearing with closing eyes,

Only resurrection of phoenix can bring surprise  

Author's Note

How does it feels?????

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"That silence nurtured the whimper,
Where tempers are lost in subtle war,
A battle of sarcasm & ache,
Wholly equipped with fiery scars."
As long as men in power twist the truth. Confusion will consume our world. I was lucky and travel to many places in this world. I never met a common man who wanted to died and wanted his child to died in some crazy war somewhere. War is create for profit today. Ask a USA citizen why we are in the Middle east? We don't know. A resurrection is needed by people of this world. "We are tire of war. Tire of hate. We want our children to know a safe and peaceful world." Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Manpreet]

This is a piece of art!! beautiful in each sense and magical in each expression. Word use perfect and "I am lost in it" is the answer to your question!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A classical, metaphoric discovery is this one......you are very talented indeed!

[Empirik]

This is complicated, I had to read it twice just to say it all correctly and a third time to understand it's meaning. It felt like it made me work. I feel we all do have a rebirth in our lives sometime. I really love your emotional descriptions, however they were all mostly depicting a form of stress. Not that, that is a bad thing. It is just super heavyhearted. I think this is a good poem. I also think it sounds better spoken than read. I was able to emphasize more. Thanks for the write. :)

[CourtneyShay]

i like the wrote this you gave nonliving things living charateristics

[reflectingus]

Silence is indeed a battle without words, and your words have greatly conveyed the battle that leaves me in an eager silence. haha, the powerful words are greatly descriptive, just blending in to the mood, the feeling of trial where words are spoken, but they just magically disappear before reaching the beholder, or maybe, they aren't spoken at all, raising a tumult of confusions and conflicting with different elements in life. Great job, powerful words.

[Raahul]

The fourth n last stanza is lucidly placing those accreditation of fortitude which can't be expressed but u did a great deed in ur writing . N the line which brings that castle under siege is 'soul divided under the sea of misunderstanding' ......BRAVO Great work again .

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done. A well written thought provoking write of the battle within us.

[thehottamale]

very well written, not sure I understand it all though, lol. But that's just me, I tend to write from the heart and more simplistically than this but I like your writing style, it is fresh and different.

[SilentNiaAngel]

This is wonderful..nice work