The Burning Desire – 2

The Burning Desire – 2

A Poem by Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
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The desire continues......

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It’s an anxiously magnetic world,

Your words are hypnotizing my wits,

What have you done to me,

Just a click away is my blitz.

 

Shrouded thy eyes with your dreams,

I pounced on screen to continue,

You cascade your Number in flash,

My ecstasy scrolled to renew.

 

The desires shredded fires,

Instantly I dialled my destiny,

The ringing bell was extremely sluggish,

My heart beat was tapping in scrutiny.

 

That longest 5 seconds of my life,

Comes to a halt on your “Hello”,

Damn!  I was speechless & astonishingly silent,

Yet my ear wants your words to swallow.

 

You soon disconnect the connection,

Our ears had with our heart,

My world was flying high in elation,

As if I was ripped off of every dearth.

 

 

I messaged you and you replied back,

Love you My Honey, Is that you?

A simple yes of mine,

Started sweetie journey anew.

 

And then second turned into minutes,

Minutes bowed to hours of bliss,

The sensational inferno seems dual,   

Atmosphere submerged in passion of kiss

 

 Then one day you asked me,

“Honey is this our true love’s attire”,

I said wrapping you in my eyes,

“My sweet heart this is “The Burning Desire””

© 2012 Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"


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Author's Note

Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
The burning desires continues...............from..chat to telephone ;-)...

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I really like this and i enjoyed! Your description is amazing!
I specially like the third line.. Thanks for sharing..
Well done :D


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it. It was very descriptive about the desires of a person.... What will part 3 be about?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done, I enjoyed this epecially the rhyme scheme.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"
Diwakar - "The Warrior of Will"

Delhi, Delhi, India



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