Tell Me Sweet Little Lies

Tell Me Sweet Little Lies

A Poem by Edward

They all seem to lie,
Using the sweet, "harmless" type of lie, but I never would have suspected you.

You don't realize the damage you've done,
Your little lie isn't a little "harmless" pun.

Well I can see through your lie, your sweet little lie,
You do not know what my eye can see.

I don't need Links "Eye of Truth" To see what you have become,
I was fed to many of your sweet little lies.

Really, stop with the disguise,
It doesn't fool me anymore.

I'm sick of your sweet little lies,
So I guess this is our "sweet little" goodbye.

Maybe ill tell "the other guy" about your little lies too,
So that he won't become too broken when he realizes how undecided you are.

© 2013 Edward


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Haha, the perfect form of revenge! Anyways, it sucks to be able to have someone lie to you, even worse to your face. No one deserves to be treated like that. But I could also relate to this due to my relationships current state. My boyfriend has recently began making plans with me certain nights and then cancels right before he is about to leave on his way to see me. He has made it a constant thing now, so whenever he says he wants to see me, I always expect him to call me awhile later telling me how sorry he is how he can't make it. I have began to wonder why he makes time for everything else in his life but never any quality time for me anymore. Pardon my rant, but this is how I can relate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

10 Years Ago

I know! It's always happened to me :/ I guess that's how messed up society is.. :/



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Wow! This piece had alot of truth to it! I liked the way the poem flowed, and how you described lies in relationships, and the hurt that those lies cause... The Truth hurts, but its much better than a lie.. Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha, the perfect form of revenge! Anyways, it sucks to be able to have someone lie to you, even worse to your face. No one deserves to be treated like that. But I could also relate to this due to my relationships current state. My boyfriend has recently began making plans with me certain nights and then cancels right before he is about to leave on his way to see me. He has made it a constant thing now, so whenever he says he wants to see me, I always expect him to call me awhile later telling me how sorry he is how he can't make it. I have began to wonder why he makes time for everything else in his life but never any quality time for me anymore. Pardon my rant, but this is how I can relate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward

10 Years Ago

I know! It's always happened to me :/ I guess that's how messed up society is.. :/

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Edward
Edward

On a mountion top isolated from the rest of the World, Canada



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