I like this, it has a good story in a few short sentences. I wonder about the . after each line and think it would work equally well without, but that's just me. Good write :)
I'm a loner
I'm a people person
I'm creative
I'm smart
I'm stupid
I'm loving
I'm sarcastic
I'm weird
I'm awesome
I'm active
I'm not that pretty
I make and follow rules
I love music
I danc.. more..