Story Line

Story Line

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

In every story, there’s always a happy ending.
- But in mine… sadly it’s never-ending.

I’m Still on chapter one… Nor two, nor three.
- In this Story, I’ll never be free.

I close the book and think off sleep through the night.
- Thinking what’ll happen, if everything’s still alright.

I quit this question, and I quit this fright.
- Not knowing of my own chapter… for the night…

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

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Very nice, yet so sad, it ran very smoothly and had a certain ring to it. Great write. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

different, and wuite refreshing. I know the struggle with actual chapters all too well, but the references to life's chapters is entrancing. well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Well it never hurt to try something different


Posted 8 Years Ago

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interesting, its very different from your usual poems, but still very well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is really deep, I love it! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Love the dual voices going on, coming to an agreement at the end. Short but I feel what you've written is enough to convey the message here.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 24, 2011
Last Updated on April 24, 2011

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