Bright Blue Eyes

Bright Blue Eyes

A Poem by The_Last_Spartan



There is a darkness,

In those bright blue eyes,

That I cannot fathom.

There is a person,

Behind the lies,

That only I can comprehend.

She was my friend.

There was a soul,

Who’s caring and patience seemed endless,

That is now trapped behind the lines

Of those shattered bright blue eyes.

There was a girl,

Who always could see the light though the dark,

But now is tormented by forgotten love.

There’s no light in those bright blue eyes,

And now I know;

You can’t choose who stays,

And who fades away.


She was my friend,

But all lives come to an end.

This is my acceptance.

© 2013 The_Last_Spartan

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gahh I love this. Isn't odd how most people like to write about sad things more often than something happy? And it is also odd that people like to read sad things or listen to sad songs. I think it might be because the sad words have a stronger emotional effect on us. They pull us in and make us think, or maybe remind us of our own hidden away feelings. Damn, now I'm babbling.... But I like this because it makes me feel the pain for this friend. Ill stop now, peace out!

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Added on October 27, 2013
Last Updated on October 27, 2013
Tags: The, Last, Spartan, Bright, Blue, Eyes, Eye, Light, Darkness, Dark



Rialto, CA

I hate these types of things; you know the: "DESCRIBE YOURSELF" thing. I always have trouble really trying to explain what kind of person I am. I guess I never really know, we never really know our tr.. more..