God?

This poem may piss some people off or not. This is just one of my thoughts on the subject.

God?

Is there a God in the sky?

Looking down deciding who shall die

Up there sitting at his prayer buffet

Wondering who he should kill today

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People say that God is everywhere

But I have never seen him there

So where do people go when they die?

If they don't go to a heaven in the sky

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I believe in energy that will never die

It's all around us, in the air and in the sky

So when the body dies where does the energy go?

Thats my question, one of the things I don't know

Reviews

[Chris Lotus]

This is a very decent piece. A true open minded writer (that cannot relate or is religious) would actually look at this and say that it greatly illustrates a new world that they have never seen before or as a new learning experience from another perspective, rather than get pissed off.

[Dread Solomon]

I believe that religion is only solace for the weak... then again, I believe in karma too...

Anyway, this is a really nice write!! It's straight to the point, and thought-provoking at the same time...

[Liva Mary]

wow... you make God sound violent lol... well He is umong us just the part not seeing Him is what questions us. I feel that way sometimes too, but I found my answer. Nice piece! =)

[Ethan Paz]

You are a very talented writer. I enjoy hearing your philosophy. Can you read this write of mine and we shall have a philosophic discussion some time:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/friendly/533577/

[Anicca]

This is though provoking poem and one that I very much enjoyed reading.

[Tina Kline]

A very hard question to answer for some.

[Alicante lullaby]

death is one of those biggest mysteries we'll never solve...intriguing...

[James Fisher]

That was pretty interesting, sometimes I have questions like that too

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It takes stones to write about this...but you are on a path that leads to answers in the end. I am always supportive of people seeking for their own truth. Good luck on your journey. You will end up very wise.

[LonelySoul]

nice poem,it didn't piss me off as much as it made me want to try and answer your question,so here is my reply...

God is a state of mind,
that only the faithful can find,
when you decide to look inside,
remember all the love,even those denied,
that is the energy that your soul will ride,
into your final sunset,upon your evening's tide,
you just can't fight,your love is the light,
another star is born to the night...LonelySoul

[lamia]

this is a subject not many dare to write about , keep up the good work!