My Beloved Teddy Bear

This poem's in ABAB form and, as most of my other writings, has exactly 100 words. (I Photoshopped a black border around my favorite picture of me with Thomas as well.)

I have so many stuffed animals on my bed:

one of my favorite is my teddy bear, Thomas!

To me, he is just my novelty, really beloved,

since he rests, so seeming indeed flawless(ly)!

 

Thomas is actually named after my Daddy.

and is so handsome just like him: charming!

Whenever I hold Thomas, I hug him gladly,

'cause he is just really, my cherished darling!

 

Of course that precious novelty is the best,

so sometimes I carry Thomas on vacation trips!

Whenever sleeping, I squeeze him to my chest,

and give him an actual real kiss to my lips!

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The teddy bear is named after U.S. President Theodore “Teddy" Roosevelt. In 1902, President Roosevelt participated in a bear-hunting trip in Mississippi. While hunting, Roosevelt declared the behaviour of the other hunters “unsportsmanlike" after he refused to kill a bear they had captured. Endearing write – just the tonic for a good feelings moment! Well done ….

[ThisVivian]

Thanks, hehe. I actually didn't know that about President Theodore Roosevelt; I named my bear after my Dad. xD

[Ana Papaya]

that's pretty cute, could make a nice kids poem

[ThisVivian]

Thank you~! :D