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This is a little thing I made up before I went to bed one night. It's from the mind of a character in a story I'm writing. He's one of two demonic twins :] (edit: Story is starting to go up now it's called Devil's Advocate)

What had we done? What had been lost in the wreckage of our life? We wanted her, we breathed her, we ate her, we slept her, and we still wanted more. Maria. What have our souls been reduced to? We are unable to live without her yet never able to have her. Maria, the hollow shell that we take care of. I’ll find a way though, a way to break this. I’ll have her. She’ll be mine…and she’ll be alive.

 

Author's Note

Would people actually be interested in me actually writing out this story?

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

I would like to read this if you decided to write it out.

[Drew Wade]

yes, i think so. this is very interesting.. I also like how the one lady's name is Maria, which almost puts a religious feel on it.. so he's loving, hating, worshiping, etc.. very very nice.. keep this up, definitely.

[Eidolon Michael]

YES! I WOULD BE VERY INTERESTED IN READING THIS STORY!!bSorry...caps...hehe...yeah...yes I'm interested in reading it. Please post! Sounds good!