He

Kinda just found this while looking around my files at school x]

He’s the world that I’m living

He’s the reason that I’m breathing

 

When the snow falls down

Around me without a sound

 

And I’m looking for help

I see him and melt

 

Together the good

Together the bad

 

I feel like I’m strong enough

To live a life like sand

Author's Note

Wrote this in 9th grade

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Well written and well done. Very talented.

[Lyrical Love]

This was nice for the 9th grade. Its a good look at a fresh mind!

[Eidolon Michael]

This is very nice. I like the way everything is phrased and the repetition of "He" at the beginning, even at the first two lines, gets your attention. Good work!