Other Thing Lost

A melancholic poem about a romance which time has snuffed out.

I never thought you'd be some

other thing lost

I never thought we'd turn away

from each other

Let the night wonder

in between us 

I never thought there'd be

this distance

A deficit of romance

as absence 

takes it toll 

Time tracks your cold retreat

I never thought you'd be a

path I took 

One footnote in a history

book

That we'd both be sleeping

so lonely

I never thought you'd come

and go 

Never planned for that

tomorrow, no

I never thought you'd be

gone

Painful is the realisation

that true devotion 

is a little more than I 

can muster 

Couldn't dote on you

Couldn't do the things you asked me to

Goodbye my 

other thing lost 

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Great poem, we are never quite ready for things at times but it is what it is and part of the lessons of life, full of feeling, very nice🌹

[C Peril]

Hi Thoughts In Time. I really appreciate your feedback. I hope I will get the opportunity to read some of your work sometime. Best, C. Peril.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No problem if you don’t we can’t review everyone’s poems but some stand out and you read them before others but I try my best to get to review some, time is so short these days and I don’t get much time either, but it doesn’t mean that I’m not interested in the poems, many thanks take care🌹