I've Been With The Dead

I've been in the coffin with the dead
I've eaten what they've been fed
I want the elixir that they desire
With their passion set my blood on fire

The dead have caressed my hair
They have kissed me everywhere
My breath has quickened with this lust
With them I have laid in the dust

I have haunted the dark ancient tombs
I have succumbed to their tempting gloom
I have wakened on the night of Halloween
About - Death - Demons - Madness - I did sing

But beyond this I have loved Immortal souls
Their passion - Their mystery - I do know
They blessed me with their Dark Conception
I now have the magic of their deception

See me - Human being - I think not
What you see of me you have forgot
For I exist in the Realm of the Dead
Could it be on you I have fed?

Reviews

[R J Askew]

A real sense of whispering malevolence afoot, esp in the last verse.

[Dream Weaver]

This is superbly written, the flow the rhyming scheme
everything about this dark and alluring piece is amazing.
love it......

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love the twisted side of it. Great work.(:

[HorrorMaster]

very creepy which i like it. :)

[Eric Cox]

Very cool poem. Excellent haunting imagery. A very cool pen on this.

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this ..alot of nice lines in this.overall i thought you did a awesome job..keep up the great writes..

[Wicahpi]

This is dark and fanatical ...
This reads like an outline to an
upcoming novel of the living dead
and loving it. I enjoyed the read!

[deeps]

This is dark and such a wonderful write.
Flows very well. I like this write alot.

[Ruth]

Wow!
This is great work!
Drk and eerie but also an underlying meaning!
To know many lands and depths!
Excellent poem!
xx

[Star Wolf]

This is very eerie and dark but has a powerful pulse of excitement in it.