Vampire Parties

Hypodermic syringes
         Injected into the victims
Arms - Hearts - Necks
Major veins
         Arteries
Lusting
        Blood
Giving little pain
Feeding parties
Injecting the crimson liquid
       Still smooth
            Still warm
       Into our fanged mouths
Laughing with ecstatic delight
These wild blood parties
       Injection after injection
Sprayed blood
       Across our now lifeless victims
Across ourselves
       Such awesome beauty
       Such hellish rapture
What a euphoric sight
       Until the arrival of grey dawn
Takes away the fun of the dark night 

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

This is a very creepy poem. Good job(:

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

a scary or a creepy poem, full of blood .... good write :)

[Eric Cox]

Very cool. Awesome job on the blood/vampire imagery. Very cool pen on this horror poem. Great job! Gives the blood a chill.

[Black Cat Fever]

Ha! What a wild party! Blood and all. Love the picture of vampires having a good time, not worried over hurting the meals.

[Jenny Nelson]

Wow. What a picture. Excellent description!!!

[Star Wolf]

Wow, this really sounds like a vampire style party. Love it!

[Marie Harrison]

What a hedonistic blood bath scene swirling in my head. Thank you for this frightful sight.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very intriguing piece... i think this represents just how sometimes parties can get out of hand when substances are involved.