Black Birds

                                                     
                      



                                                  



                                                                 
 

 High up in the pale sky
black birds are circling
seeking food somewhere below
in patterns of searching

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

Very nice. I see flocks of black birds a lot this time of year.
Clever and well done. I like the images you added, they enchance
the poem.

[Tina Kline]

thanks very much!

[Chris38]

Beautifully simple.

[Invisible Ink]

Nice! I like this direct, simple, elegant write which provides very vivid imagery and peaks my curiosity and nostalgia for something, but I don't know what.

[Tate Morgan]

I thin it is interesting how you added the multimedia I for one think multimedia makes or breaks a piece you did well here and my imagination is large

[E.H. Monroe]

Needs no more and no less.
This way the audeince can use their minds.
Could be vultures in search of a human pile, or something simpler. Short but thought provoking.

[~~Mere~d~i~t--h~~]

Beautiful**

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the images! goes so well with this great poem!

[Black Cat Fever]

This is great. The images used & the poem. Outstanding work!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Good one..Very creative..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one this eve..Sunflower..

[Star Wolf]

I love this, its rather fun, love the circling birds. Awesome job!