What would I do without you?

Just last night

I appreciated with all of my might

What would happen if you left this world before me

Nay, I say, No!

I see no purpose for living, no reason for 

Spring to bloom

Summer to enjoy

Autumn to tuck in cosily

I see only Winter

The sharp, howling winds

The frostbites surround me with 

A marvellous vengeance

Mocking my earlier arrogance

The Earth dances with the Sun

Alas, the Moon!

Cheeky thing she is, 

She steals the show sometimes

The clock ticks away

Tick-tock

A second down

Tock-tick

Two seconds down

Is time on my side

The clock indeed has 

Two Cupid arrows

Don't be stupid

Tick-tock

My heart skips a beat

Tick-tock

Another beat is skipped 

I see you

Feel you

Smell your intoxicating scent

Another beat

A toast!

To my dark-haired damsel

Pour that disgusting concoction

Till we can't find our mouths no more

I am back in this damned darkness

Memories a gathering light

Normal people have no idea how beautiful the dark is

With you

It is getting dark, my love...

Very dark...

Very...

...

..

.

Reviews

[Ishita Dixit]

Wow! This was so deep and emotional.
I hate to imagine the thought of living my life without my love being around.
Great job Tejash!

[Tks]

Hey Ishita, thank you for stopping by:) Yes, the world can be a frightening place without them around. I am sure your prince charming will soon sweep you into his arms forever! Have a good day ahead!

[Jamestown]

This is really good my friend, wow, the end couldn't have been any better. I felt
emotion all the way through, you kept my attention on heighten alert for sure,thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[Tks]

Hey James, your reviews are always deeply appreciated:) I like how you take the time to read my poems carefully and recognise the nuances.
Thank you for stopping by, have a great day ahead!

[AaronFreitas]

"Just last night
I appreciated with all of my might
What would happen if you left this world before me
Nay, I say, No!
I see no purpose for living, no reason for"

I love the way this poem starts out and set the foundation for the rest of the poem.
awesome job with this piece :)

[Tks]

Hey Aaron, thanks for stopping by, my friend! Have an awesome day ahead, looking forward to your new writing:)

[Lavender Soya]

Hey there Tks,

What a wonderful write, no less than a good read. I can sense your deep affection for that lovely damsel. Moreover, I am amazed by the British touch (re: cosily) with some Shakespearean tone. Splendid! It's captivating from start to finish.

Kind regards,
Lavender

[Tks]

Hi there Lavender! Yes, she is special:) gosh, I'm blushing just thinking about her now hahaha! I really do love Shakespeare, Wordsworth, those poets from the Romantic Movement:) your poetry does spark some inspiration in me to write as well!

[Lavender Soya]

Hahaha Awwee. I felt my zygomatic muscles move. That made me smile! I am happy for you. It's really nice to have someone to like. I couldn't agree more. Those poets are brilliant! And thank you for feeling that way towards my poems. Keep writing! :-)

[Cool Girl]

This is so wonderful!! The ending was so beautiful and fragile.. It almost made me want to cry.

[Tks]

Hey Cool Girl:) thank you for your kind, wonderful words.. they always inspire me to do better. Yesterday night was a real tosser ahahha! Thank you once again, have a good day ahead!

[Cool Girl]

Awe, im so happy that you enjoy my reviews! You're very welcome:)