Whispering Trees

Whispering Trees

A Poem by Tom
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Two of my dear cafe friends have been urging me to pen a poem sooner than later, so that I did, and as such, it's dedicated to both, I guess they'll know who they are without me disclosing same?

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Whilst out for a stroll, if truth be told
when first, I heard the news,
she's going away, no more to stay
ne'er again, we'll schmooze

Carried on the breeze, the whispering tress
sang a lonesome lullaby,
my love so fair, with raven black hair
alas, must say goodbye

My heart sank low, why would she go
looking up, I cried aloud,
has she met another, a secret lover
I implored a passing cloud?

I do not know, you'll have to go
and seek the wise old owl
then raindrops fell, my tears as well
this grief, I could not cowl

I plundered on, far, far beyond
in hope to engage,
and there perched high, I did spy
one known as the sage

O' eminent bird, truth is your word
pray tell it is falsehood,
for I am rueful, my lady beautiful
has gone to Bollywood

Be calm good sir, said he up there
let me assuage this yearn,
the trees tell lies, I see two dark eyes
awaiting your return

Thank you wise owl, cheek by jowl
reunited we shall be,
then homewards ran, a renewed man
my heart now filled with glee

And there within, fair lady of dark skin
from land of tiger and jaguar
saying, a pushy boss, wished her to cross
far sea, to become a movie star

But as is her kind, politely, she did decline
for here, she feels at ease,
in this land so green, where can be seen
those beguiling, whispering trees

© 2017 Tom


Author's Note

Tom
schmooze
verb
talk intimately and cosily;

Cowl: A hood shaped covering

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Ah, she finally came back to you! A lovely take of loss and return of love… your imagery is excellent and of course your chosen words….the whispering trees knew all along that she would return….and schmooze with you!
I enjoyed the poem very much Tom
Best, B.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thanks muchly Betty!
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome Tom!
Best, B



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I love how you tell a story in this poem! It’s fun and again your wit shines through! Well done! Very enjoyable!
Tabby

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tabby, you soon cottoned on to my style, glad you enjoyed!
Lovely... and a fun read..

Wow you are The Master of Rhyme !

Jazzy..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

6 Years Ago

Yes Jazzy, I love when it all comes together, though a little story to tell is my thing!
J. J.  Nightingale

6 Years Ago

I know !!! ... ..and You are welcome !!! .. Have a wonderful Weekend !!!
A thoroughly enjoyable read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tom

6 Years Ago

Thank you Autumn for stopping by and commenting!
happy ending to a loving poem with ,as usual , great rhythm and rhyme good job !! fun sweet poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

6 Years Ago

An extra Big Thank you my friend Marilyn, you're the first to stop by and comment!

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