You're my poison

- 'What's your poison?'

Oh darling, 

please

decant me

a chalice 

of 

you...

I will 

inhale

your heady

aroma

and 

sip from it 

for 

all

 my days.

I will giggle

like a teen

on bubbles

that tingle

my 

blood.

I will get tipsy;

ramble...

incessantly...

of how utterly

captivating

you are.

I will get drunk

on the brew

of your love

and 

never be

hung-over

~

for I will 

never 

sober of 

you

Author's Note

toying around with pauses.

Reviews

[winter;lyra]

stop trying to get me into romance, gotta keep the manly hermit act! i can't resist the lyrical beauty of unwavering passion like this!

(i once, long time ago, wrote something named "sinful summer club", i dont know why but this combined with the color red reminds me of it)

[Tony Jordan]

Your edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll be a quivering romantic again if you aren't careful.

I like autobiographical sound of 'Sinful Summer Club' - heh heh

[Diamond]

And the same for lifetimes to come. True Love is like ambrosia that can poison someone. I am only trying to flow in your thought. Please do not mind if this doesn't look like a review. lol..An amazing write.

[Tony Jordan]

Your words - whether you consider them a review (which I do) are always welcome and appreciated Queen. Thank you so much.

[Michael X]

That ending is infinite. Romantic form. This is the classic approach of love poetry!

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you Michael.
My cup runneth over with inspiration every time I see her, you might say.
Lol
But the UK is a looong way away from California
Heh heh

[Alisa Js]

What a beautiful metaphor for true love...

....if only, all men felt this way.

Nicely penned.

Alisa

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you so much Alisa.
I appreciate your visit very much.

[Alisa Js]

You are most welcome...likewise...

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-)

[Beccy]

Beware of the potent spirit within; we females almost always never show our strength until you've opened the bottle. :))

Beccy.

[Tony Jordan]

In this age of ubiquitous tattooing you'd think ...just a little one ...e.g. '80 proof' ...
Thank you for reviewing this Beccy. I appreciate it a lot.
:)

[Valentine]

Lets hope that she smells nice or you might recant your words. Valentine

[Tony Jordan]

Wow - I love that wordplay Kathie. Very cool indeed.
I bet she smells like cocoa butter and summer's breezes and unicorns and candy cotton ...
mmmm

Thanks Kathie