Worth It

Worth It

A Poem by Tori

I remember the rain pouring
Your smile,
Your laugh,
Your hands at my hips 
Pulling me in..
Gripping me..
Claiming me..
Loving me,
Not common for me..
Your smile lingers against mine,
Ripping the breath from me,
The feeling of a light weight,
Ready,
Eager,
Worth it.

© 2015 Tori


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Tori
Little different from my normal writings..

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This is good. It shows the excitement of love in a way that is fitting... The lines are short, like the person's mind can't form a coherent thought when thinking about their lover, and while I was reading it, it seemed almost airy... Like the person was breathless. It was very accurately written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like this! I am new here at WritersCafe. I happened across your poem and it truly sent me. Gave me a smile that I needed tonite. Thank you and well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful piece! Love the carefree description of love

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great write!
Calming, peaceful and sweet:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love really is the ultimate high. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it :) Nothing like kissing in the rain! Good work Tori

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such is passionate love. A sensual write that reminds one of how light we feel when we are in love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tori

9 Years Ago

Strange, but amazing feeling when you find it.
....................

9 Years Ago

yes, it is :)

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Added on April 12, 2015
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