Deeper Than You

August 2015.

You instill a fear that no other man could do,

The fear, that I've fallen deeper than you.

And I'm sure I'm right, if Karma is true,

Cuz while he was thinking about me,

I was thinking about you.

As soon as I looked in your eyes again...

I knew.

So I left him. For you.

I couldn't resist our natural lure..

Now my heart is slowly breaking as your actions show our future

"You're gonna lose her..."

They even told you,

"You're gonna lose her."

We're not even gonna make it to December,

and if we can't do that, what chance is there forever. 

You're off in a different country right now.

You say "I promise I been faithful baby, 

but I been watching Little Cuz spit game at the ladies!"

That's cute, I think, until word reaches ear, 

that "Little Cuz" also has a girlfriend here.

You told me he slept with a b***h on night one.

Baby, call me crazy, but I'm about to get my gun...

I used to trust you so much,

But a hurt heart is skeptical,

I thought you were supposed to treat me like I'm special...

Reviews

[Planet x]

I love your words , they are open and honest
Relationship well described

[RomaJ]

The emotions are nicely expressed. The rhythm and flow; and just the overall realness in your writes is just amazing. "...but I'm about to get my gun" haha I loved that. The gun being a pencil and all the spent lead; all over the paper. It's always good to get it all out (on paper) instead of bottling it all up inside. Nicky done.

[FateDictates]

love what you do with words..