First Embrace

First Embrace

A Poem by Trace
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What happened next from "A Pondering Moon"

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The sand was warm between their toes
As they held on to each other...


Not wanting this first embrace to ever end



As their lips explored the unknown taste of something new
Until their knees grew weary and they fell together to the beach



                And the pondering moon hung low.

Hands that once clung now began to explore
To touch where each had only dreamed of

Haste was the order in which buttons were undone
And clothes that bound were quickly shed
That they could feel the exquisite connection they knew had always existed

Passions controlled their every move
Which felt as natural as the waves that moved the sands

Eager lips found her swelling breasts
Soft hands found the strength of the man she so desired



                And a tender moan escaped her smile

This was what they had both waited for



                And as she guided him in to her warmth
                                Their lips met again


With a promise under the pondering moon


                           to never part....

© 2014 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
See my poem: " A Pondering Moon "

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Definitely ramped up the sexuality here, but done with beautiful description that imparts their eagerness to be together and complete. Despite the more explicit feeling, there is still a feel of relaxing into this moment rather than rushing through it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

8 Years Ago

I so appreciate your excellent comments and wonderful compliments.
I do enjoy writing about .. read more



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Passionate in the embrace of love and beauty. Powerful in the embrace of forces unseen to never part. When moans escape those anxious lips, it is time to harvest the sighs...Excellent, sir...:)...................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Time to harvest the sighs...... what a great line
You should use that in a poem. Would be an .. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you Trace. Might consider. Not sure. You are welcome...:).....
Very beautiful words leading to an exquisite scene. Love the flow and delicate nature expressed here. Nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this poem.

Trace

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Added on November 17, 2014
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Tags: Love, passion, moonlight, beaches

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Trace
Trace

somewhere in, UT



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