In The Sunlight       (Collaboration Trace and MsJewel)

In The Sunlight (Collaboration Trace and MsJewel)

A Poem by Trace
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a new favorite collaboration with my writing partner

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The fields were ripe, the strawberries sweet

on vines intertwined, glistening from the dew

through summers warm golden flecks

silken new grass sprung forth from meadows green

 

We stood a moment in the sunlight

a moment uncounted by time

to sigh…    

                   to swoon…

               

With nary the touch of your hand in mine

                          the leaves rustled

long branches bending to the wind

                                your tender lips beckoned

 

The scene summoned emotions unfamiliar…

 

Is it not sweeter than a foolish kiss

or to bear your bodies weight upon my breast?

 

With a fragrant perfume adrift on the breeze

the sensation of you…next to me…

breathtaking   


Yes, for a momen   

summer held us 

             ... in the sunlight

© 2015 Trace


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this has to be one of my favorite collaborations with Julie.
thank you all for the great comments.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The flow of this one is really good! Great collaboration.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Trace
mattavelli

5 Years Ago

Of course. :)
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Trace, this is so vivid! The sweetest most tender intimacy kiss by a brilliant warm sun :) Gorgeous!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace
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5 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
Always a heavy sigh from me after reading one of your gloriously romantic collaborations. Julie and Trace, this was wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

It is such a joy to share the same thoughts and be able to write something that pulls each of our wo.. read more
A gorgeous poem with incredible imagery and class filling the hearts with all the beauty nature and life have to offer. Excellent....:).......

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Sami. ... Thank you my friend for reading and your wonderful compliments and comments on our poem. <.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....Both too.....:).......
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Gee
Beautifully written......

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.

Trace
This is truly exquisite!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

I am so glad you liked this, one of my favorites I co-wrote with a very good friend.
We have.. read more

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Added on August 1, 2015
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