SATIN SANDS

SATIN SANDS

A Poem by Trace
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Dreams can be so.........

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As hand in hand we strolled the shore
Satin sands tickling our feet
Ocean breezes summer sweet.

Please don't wake me from this dream
Don't tell me it's not real
What it is I feel

Yet Amber swords of morning sun
Pierce my eyelids cruelly bright
Rudely ends the night

But where oh where have you gone
It was merely a flicker ago
Yet I know

It was so real, surreal
Your smile, your sparkling eyes
Your gentle sighs

Don't tell me it wasn't real
Come back come back, take my hand
In my dreams of satin sands.

© 2017 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
Fond memories of the Bahamas.

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Exquisite
Beautiful
Lovely
Captivating

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poem.

Trace
I've never been to the Bahamas, but it sounds lovely. Your descriptions are gorgeous and the rhyme pattern works well. Thank you for sharing this beautiful memory.
Hugs, Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

This was more of a dream with someone that I didn't want to end.
I am so glad you liked it.read more
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"Yet Amber swords of morning sun
Pierce my eyelids cruelly bright "

This is so very descriptive in such eloquent language. I enjoyed this piece and the rhyming pattern.

Good job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on my poem

Your th.. read more
Ahh when we have the most amazing dreams but the morning intrudes upon the fantasy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

When dreams and fantasies collide
Waking is often unwelcome.

Thank you for rea.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Trace

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