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Uncontrolable Desire

Uncontrolable Desire

A Poem by Trace

A little poem about the power of love


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Uncontrollable Desire

I thought I was in control

I am not one who is easily swayed

I know who I am and what I want,,,

and nobody,

But nobody could change my mind.....



That's what I thought,,,,,,,


Until your slinky black gown hit the floor

And your eyes had that look in them

Like the ghostly flames of a simmering fire,


That look that tells a man:

“You are not the one in control here”


The temptation was overwhelming

As you whispered:

“Come to me.”


And with that,

With that coaxing sway of your hips

As you invitingly sauntered toward the bed

I had no more control of my actions

Than a wild river raging headlong for the ocean,


That irresistible attraction

As you seductively lay down upon your satin sheets

Your sensual body offered

So beautifully,

         So desirable,


The woman in you coyly knew

at that moment

You could get this man to do anything


And Yet,


This Man was wise enough to know that

What you wanted was to have a real man,

A man to take you, to control your pleasure

To make you feel like you were the only woman that

He needed,,,,,,

               That I Needed, That I had to have,

Above anything else in the world,


And it was then,

Yes, it was at that moment

As our bodies found each other

We both knew


There was nothing stronger

No desire more uncontrollable

Than the undeniable

Power of Love.

© 2017 Trace

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Oh my goodness this was seductive and hot !

Posted 3 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2 Months Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed my sensual side too.
I like writing of real emotions and human desir.. read more
Audrey M.

2 Months Ago

Definitely returning to read more 😊

2 Months Ago

Thank you. I have more to post.
Very passionate & romantic, & hot!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2 Years Ago

Thanks for the comments and compliments on this poem. I am sure you know what I am talking about he.. read more
Fanning myself here. Filled with passion and sensuality. Beautifully written as only you can, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments on this little tease.

Huggs. Trace
Beautiful, soft, sensual, yet with an edge that is uniquely you my dear friend.

100/100 coy little glances
Hugs, Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


3 Years Ago

I like your glances

Miss you tons

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4 Reviews
Added on November 9, 2017
Last Updated on November 9, 2017
Tags: Love, Desire, sensuality



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I will always love poetry....... I am a Poet But sometimes,,,,,, It makes my brain hurt more..

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