Time Passage

 

If only I could live in the

Fantasy world I once knew,

Where the monsters were imaginary

And people lived in shoes…

 

If only I could be young again

Like it was before

My heart so full of life

Would constantly soar…

 

If only my life was

Ready made

I could have enjoyed

My life as a babe…

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

Believe me, my dear, this is the best of all possible worlds as far as we humans are concerned, because this is the one we are in, and if you can see more and better than your neighbor, then it's your job to help your neighbor. If you lament a world that does not exist, then you live in a world that does not exist, and you and your neighbor are both lost...

[Stacey Watts]

In the great words of Peter Pan. "I never want to grow up." This was a wonderful piece. Oh to long for the days of youth and being free.

[deeps]

I enjoyed this, especially your second stanza,
If I could be young again..I probably wouldn't do
have the things I have done. Then again I don't know,
It sure wouldn't change today. I like this, very well expressed.