For the Missing Piece of my Aching Heart

For the missing piece of my aching heart:

In some dimension you are waiting

Possibly happy at this moment

Sinking into each other’s embrace,

Everyone else was just killing time until I met you.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

In a short verse, you captured that emotion. Beautiful piece, well written.

[Kait]

Thanks Rita! I changed the ending so it had more of a flow to it by saying:
"everyone who came before was just a way of killing time,
until You
met I."
This revision may not be grammatically correct but it makes it sound better, don't you think?

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes - I do like that flow better - more dramatic! Nice!

[Androglossia]

Of loyalty and love. Inflicting sweet misery in one's self in the name of love. Very emotional write expressed in brevity.