A girl i need

A girl i need

A Poem by Her Sheild (Tray R.)


I want a girl,
I need her now.
A girl that is as beautiful as a perl,
a girl that will make me say WOW!
A girl that knows how to love me,
She will know how to move it.
A girl that will not flee,
that will not quit.
A women that is very special,
A women that is unique a way.
A person that is more than special,
She is like me.
That girl needs to be you,
because without you I am blue.

(hope Taylor(Landmello'sgirl) likes it :))

© 2010 Her Sheild (Tray R.)

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Sweet, lovely poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Now thats love. awsome!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I really loved the flow of this whole thing, and the way repetition seemed so natural with the piece. Brilliant, really.

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago

Yeah I like it Tray ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hmm this is quite good :) I like the way that you have illustrated the need for this girl... Really good ! Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxi

Posted 10 Years Ago

A girl you need lol. Tell you this men and woman are truly from to different planets...So all I can say is this you won't find a girl exactly the same as you...because for some reason woman need attention they don't get it they'll fine it. But honestly...attention is just something I say ewwwww to! This is wonderful though nice job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on September 7, 2010
Last Updated on September 7, 2010


Her Sheild (Tray R.)
Her Sheild (Tray R.)

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Hi, im Tray Rhor, I love Taylor ^^ I just got back together with her and i love her as much as i have for the past 2 years we wern't together and her friend logan's very kind to her which makes me ha.. more..


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