A girl i need

I want a girl,
I need her now.
A girl that is as beautiful as a perl,
a girl that will make me say WOW!
A girl that knows how to love me,
She will know how to move it.
A girl that will not flee,
that will not quit.
A women that is very special,
A women that is unique a way.
A person that is more than special,
She is like me.
That girl needs to be you,
because without you I am blue.

(hope Taylor(Landmello'sgirl) likes it :))

Reviews

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Sweet, lovely poem :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Now thats love. awsome!

[KatiePie]

I really loved the flow of this whole thing, and the way repetition seemed so natural with the piece. Brilliant, really.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

It's sweet

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

Yeah I like it Tray ^^

[Caitlynxoxo]

Hmm this is quite good :) I like the way that you have illustrated the need for this girl... Really good ! Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxi

[nono]

A girl you need lol. Tell you this men and woman are truly from to different planets...So all I can say is this you won't find a girl exactly the same as you...because for some reason woman need attention they don't get it they'll fine it. But honestly...attention is just something I say ewwwww to! This is wonderful though nice job!