Dear Society by Lavi

I’m back and please do have a read of my poems as any feedback or suggestions of improvement is much appreciated as poetry is a style I am truly inspired by to expand on.

Dear society a poem

Slamming pounds of ceramic shards onto the ground where my soul is tangled in vile chains

Isolated and discarded alone; my body is a funeral to be displayed but not a single person remains

Though, it’s I that pours my mighty heart onto those fragile individuals yet not a single one desires my existence as if I am not qualified for having a friend

Broken fragments of this illusion cracks like glass implying nonetheless no one is waiting for me so why pretend?

Vivid imagery of vast glow of sunshine radiating on my face as I illustrate a life with a close friend accompanying me

Loneliness is what it will ever be

Sweet succulent blossoms turn black like dead ashes of my once living soul ought to mercifully have

Congruent refuge demise upon the aching miniature victims begging with knees paved down and sorrows stream as I with them are deterrent as slaves

Life is a blessing illusion but a curse of itself.

Author's Note

Please do have a read of my poems as any feedback or suggestions of improvement is much appreciated as poetry is a style I am truly inspired by to expand on.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the lonely poet...there was a day when poetry was a popular genre...nowadays...not so much...only other poets respect and savor the lonely poet, who feels like he or she is professing to know one.
Imagine the plight of the confessional beat poets if no one reads them...
they speak into a microphone and the hall echoes with emptiness.
I really like this piece, Lavi,
j.

[LCat80star]

Wow! As I read this I guess poetry deserves it's recognition. It is the only powerful art which is full of expression as well! The majority needs to understand what true work is but I can't do that. Also, the lonely poet who is concealed needs to be recognised and have their work read. I appreciate your intricate thoughts and I'm glad you liked this piece.

[Chris Shaw]

How true, life is a blessing as well as a curse. It has its sharp shards as well as its feathers. For me these lines emphasise loneliness. Not having a friend to share with, is a great sadness which leads to isolation. Not a good place to be. Thank you Lavi. Have a good Sunday.

Chris

[LCat80star]

True, it is about loneliness especially how everyone is now equipped with an electronic device. Another good interpretation thank you for reading. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased to know that I am getting near what you intended. Poetry is so subjective, at times the reader can be led down a different path altogether:)

[LCat80star]

Very true, poetry is indeed subjective. Your perception of my poems are close to what I intend which is really good!