A Poem by Treo LeGigeo

There once was a little number eight...

There once was a little number eight,
Which took on itself to negate,
Freedom, right,
Before they finally saw the light,
It gets better now, state by state.

© 2013 Treo LeGigeo

Author's Note

Treo LeGigeo
Yes, this is about Proposition 8.

The last line is a reference to It Gets Better.

For a limerick contest.

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Posted 8 Years Ago

The picture you chose immediately piqued my interest. Nice read.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is very interesting, but good!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Another thing about this number....
Flip it on it's side and you have infinity.
Play with it!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Treo LeGigeo

8 Years Ago

That was an episode of Futurama, "Proposition Infinity" about relationships between robots and human.. read more
go number eight! This is great :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Awesome. Just blew my mind. That was just brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Not up to date with my politics but that was a nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

You make words sing !!!
It could not have been any shorter or definitely no more sweeter
AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

At first impression, the picture, i was drawn in. Proud of you to choose such a strong political subject. And also inspired. :) good luck.

Posted 8 Years Ago

As much as i dont understand this but i think that's down to my own lack of knowledge rather than your way of depicting it because i sense a powerful message underlining it.
I loved it none the less its sweet, its got a brilliant flow and leaves you with a warm feeling inside.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on September 28, 2012
Last Updated on June 14, 2013
Tags: limerick


Treo LeGigeo
Treo LeGigeo

Sydney, NSW, Australia

I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym. I started .. more..


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