Magnetic Poem #2

Imagination, like bold ink,

Could grace her silhouette,

But joy here is an empty dream...

A burned out cigarette.

Reviews

[V. Lucien Maier]

again the limited vocabulary (which is not due to you) holds you back from fully expressing yourself.
Could make a cool coffee table book though. but it would be better if you took a picture of the poem on the fridge and post that, That way people see it in the proper premise.

[..R.I.P..]

Beautiful, simply beautiful! Great write. :)
~PJ

[Lauren Marie]

The only thing wrong with this is that the first letter of each line should be capitalized.
This poem as well has an air of mystery ... I'd love to turn it into a story.
Simply visual and beautiful!
~Lauren