Glimpses

There’s still songs to be sung,

There’s still love to be spent.

I want you here,

But I’m hoping for more.

Give me all your pain,

For all you are worth.

Never leave me behind.

Author's Note

Just as effective

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind and hopeful needs and thoughts. I liked them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amber Lily]

Everything seems to be that much more enjoyable when your with someone else. Very true words :)

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Such a creative cry for help. Few words that says about the pain as well as the ecstasy of love. There is a humbleness in this writing, a lust, a fear and a life.

Beautiful work.

P.S I agreed with Softlyfall on the comment on the verb in the first line

[Scheherazade]

Simple and yet powerful. Nice work.

[softlyfall]

I like this very much and if I have one critique, it is the first line...the verb and subject do not agree (There's = there is....but songs is plural. You need to use There are songs or There's a song)
Much said in few words, very very good.