Inject

Inject me to be well

Inject me with the strangest idea’s

The sorrowful in depth ones

Ones of written pasts

Inject me with the clearest of idea’s

Crystal unlike the moon

Solid not like the trains

Train me to be well

Author's Note

The thoughts of a mother at her daughters possible deathbed. Based off of a story I've been writing for some time.

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Dear Poet, a fine piece you wrote. I read it again after reading your notes and it made all
The total sense. The poem it self could hold a lot of meaning, but with thw personal touches, this
Piece is quite inspirational. Very well done, so cool, Thanks EG

[Amber Lily]

I love writing poems based off of current novels in progress, this is something I like to do as well to keep my thoughts for the book going. This makes sense for a mothers thoughts to be after the lose of a child. It's tragic. She wants to remember happier times when she was alive, but will not forget how it ended. Great write/writing exercise. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the hope in the poetry. Good to be injected with thoughts and some direction. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tomás Ó C..]

Its hard to understand at times like this....

[Scheherazade]

Interestingly obscure and deep. It kind of reminds me of Mina Loy. Well done. A good piece of work.

[softlyfall]

Interesting development and thought processing. I can see that you use no punctuation and that is your choice as an artist.

[Twenty Degrees]

Yeah it's always been in my style, however many people have suggested I use it. Just most of the time it ends up as periods.

[softlyfall]

That's completely up to you but the reason you might consider it is this could be misread. If you dont mind that, carry on :)