Total Mess

It is anyone's guess
That I'm such a total mess
But I'm possessed with this quest
As my chest hurts from which I ingest
Having a hard time to digest
I lie down to rest
And trying to feel blessed
But I feel so restless
And then shower with Zest
Am I in distress or feeling stress
I try to caress but not feeling my best
They do their best to press
But it is pointless
Maybe it's a test
But not at my request
I must confess that I need to invest
As I try to suppress
The fact that I'm a total mess.
by: James W. Mckay
      August 18, 2023

Reviews

[Melinda McQueen]

A neat write.
And I like the rhyme scheme you stayed with

Your Texas neighbor (Well, we're both in TX. You know what I mean... I hope. lol)
Melinda

[James Mckay]

Well Thank ya fine neighbor and fellow Texan fer yer sweet words. We need to do a rain dance for our state.....it's too dang dry

[Melinda McQueen]

My computer has just informed me that "Rain is coming"! Yeeeeeey Lets look for a rambow!