Racing thoughts

An idea for a new poem type.

This is my song to you,

You should always stay blue.

This is my little prayer

Please, accept my slayer.

Fighting in the boxing ring

This is how my voice sings.

Little by Little the boy cries.

As he fails, and his hope dies.

This is my song to you,

Please accept it as true.

I'm sorry for all the mistakes.

If only I could have some retakes.

Leave me in an endless ring

As the throne is taken by a king.

Please do not read these lines

For I am writing them in blinds.

This is how my life stays

This is why I have got no says.

My love for you is great.

But I fear it is too late.

My name is not that real.

For this may be my final meal.

This is my song to all of you

Please, follow it like all you do!

I'm sorry for this stupidy

This is a silly novility.

Let the birds fly up in the million skies.

I'm so tired of the endless lies.

I give over my whole soul to you

Read these lines and you shall know too.

I fear that in my death I shall die.

But I hope loved ones at least cry.

The music around me is a trance.

Let me take you in this exotic dance.

I'm sorry for this little cake.

I feel like a slithering snake.

Author's Note

This poem was written without editing and stopping. My fingers never left the keyboard, hence the name racing thoughts. I wrote pairs of lines that just popped into my head, one after the other. The result is actually quite good!

Reviews

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. the result is intensely brilliant ... and immensely so ... you have a potent mind ... and it's immensely sublime ... there are so many things that you express here ... such brutal introspection ... poetry is so often a finger print of the soul ... sometimes our journey is so exacting ... and there are so many blues we can't explain ... that we end up second guessing ourselves ... but you've gotta do what you've gotta do ... and look how you shine ... so ... so radiant ... heroic you are ...

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Oh, WOW!!! This is absolutely amazing!! It's just WOW!!! And your finger snever left the keyboard?! That just adds to it, that you managed to write this down without having to think too much! Wow, haha. :)