Lost Girl

Rebecca was about six years old when she had sensed that she was in fact different than most children her age. She lived with her Grandmother Ann and each night Rebecca would crawl into her grandmother's bed and wake her and explain in a whisper "I saw a little girl grandma, and she wanted me to listen to her, but then she disappeared" Ann always took Rebecca into her arms and let Rebecca's imagination run for miles but perhaps Ann knew something Rebecca didn't, maybe Rebecca wasn't using her imagination. As Rebecca grew up her tails of people appearing and reappearing in her room only got more and more believable, she would talk to them like they were standing right in front of her many had thought it was an imaginary friend but the sincere way Rebecca described them made her grandmother Ann think differently and besides Rebecca was way too old for imaginary friends. It was still something Rebecca did every night although she was a ten year old girl with friends and did well with communicating with other's, and seeing these things never bothered Rebecca, never caused her any feeling of discomfort, these ghostly, spirits had befriended Rebecca and everyone else knew it but Rebecca herself...

Author's Note

Ignore grammar please? What do you think about the story/details? Based on a very true story. Any ideas on how to finish?

Reviews

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Tyra,
I just saw ur profile and I wanted to see one on your writings..I like how u wrote it..I liked the story, but I think this story doesn't end here..I mean u should do it longer and give an ending..while u said this is based in a true story, then u should really think about that: if u wanna use ur imagination here to make the sotry longer, or u r going to say the truth..I think, u got the story so do it!