Remembrance

Here we are, 

In this one way road. 

With no point of return. 

Aeons ago. 

During one of these dark nights. 

We made a promise. A bond. Of love. 

To make a journey together. 

Till the end of time. 

 I remember that cold night. 

Amidst falling snowflakes. 

You held your hand in mine, never to let go. 

I remember your eyes. 

Dazzling. 

I remember your smile. 

Enchanting. 

 And here we are again. 

Together. 

For one last time. 

The bridges we built. 

Are en-flamed with fire. 

For one last time, 

We leave all the love we had behind. 

This blank journey. 

Has come to an end. 

As I walk the monotony fields, 

The snowflakes fall upon me. 

Covering this earth, 

In layers of cold. 

Covering our souls. 

The stories will be told.

Reviews

[Quill]

perhaps the past should remain in the past and our present should be molded by its lessons

[Ellen Kolman]

I love this so much...it is very beautiful...I can feel the deep emotion...I love the imagery...soooo beautiful is this poem...I love it BRAVO

[Blackheart]

Thank you so much for your kind words Ellen. :)

[Ellen Kolman]

my pleasure sweetie

[Aura Devour]

Damn, this is a sad tale yet it's real. I like the mystical yet melancholic touch to it. This one hit me right in. :)

[Blackheart]

Glad you liked this. Had a bit of a gothic influence coupled with tragedy and loss of love. Thank you for your review and for stopping by. Cheers. :)

[Solar]

A lyrical melancholy, with a promising twang at the end.

[Blackheart]

Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it. :)

[Writer forever]

Very nice a well done hope you have the chance to read my poem

[Blackheart]

Thank you for reviewing. Will check out your stuff soon. :)

[Metal Orchid]

The bridge is still lying unnoticed, go explore :)

[Blackheart]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)