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written in 2007

Standing outside, stars for sole protection,
The world appears just like an illusion
When enveloped by these dark shadows
You are touched by the midnight arrows.

Feeling like heaven but looking like hell,
Listen to the stories crickets tell,
Start running, quickly find your pace
Rest in peace in this calm, cold place.

Reviews

[nonno noo]

i like the whole aura of mystery surrounding your words. nice writing

[Jessica Danielle]

It sounds as if there is a hopeless feeling to this poem. but at the same time beauty shines through it. its a very nice write. i enjoyed reading it. thank you for sharing this