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Loving you

Loving you

A Poem by UnderCompulsion

Verse 1.
I see a life in you, your soul is free
You had crash me down like a rainstorm
I feel your look at me, it's seeing right through me
And all I wanna do is to get to know you

Verse 2
I am asking myself why do you have to be so far away
But when I close my eyes I see you standing there
Making your way to me,in the crowd you've found me
Because we are the same,old souls in a young body

Chorus
I am falling to fast now, you can't save me
I am breaking apart, this air is too stiff
Choking with my own love, it's unreal
I can't believe how much you're making me feel

Verse 3
I feel like I could dance with you all night long
No lies, no pretending, with you I can be me
Just love, no fights, we have the same dream
To find the world behind a wall so we could see

Prechorus
It's getting too serious,I feel like I am hanging on
Every word you say, and I can't hear anything else

Chorus

Why do you have to be so enchanting?
Making me fall in love so deep
I can't get out of it

Chorus


© 2013 UnderCompulsion


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I think if you put some musical notes in that, it's going to be perfect :)
Great poem :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow was taking a trip to memmory lane- :(
Those two verses were absolute I could see my self in it and when the rest came my eyes followed you I love this,truely i do I see the writer in it and my self marvelouse!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

6 Years Ago

Hehe when you releasing a song?? Let me know asap hehe take care and continue with your beautiful an.. read more
UnderCompulsion

6 Years Ago

Thank you again :) And I am not relesing a song, because I still don't have music for this lyrics, b.. read more
Carl Drake Barnard

6 Years Ago

Your kindness is well appreciated :)
Thank you
Is that a poem or a great song ? :)
i liked this one too and you fluttered me by such a piece once again. I love your chorus's...and verse 3..that's really well and well penned. your flow is great and impactable i think especially to me.
this time you'll deserve to have this 100/100 because your this write makes me crazy and memorized my nice moments...of life. well,this piece's again i think plucked from reality and a tree of realness's...where truthness's fall in a form of sweets fruits...
hey....you should have to continue this write..add few more nice words....
you made if from your heart...i got it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


UnderCompulsion

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful reviews. To answer on your question, this is a song, actually lyrics. I.. read more
Rahul

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot to notify me that you'll continue it someone and i wish you'd then love to let me know .. read more
UnderCompulsion

6 Years Ago

Sure, I'll let you know if I'll continue it :)
A heart swaying to the tones of life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yeah I can definitely relate to this. Your song is really heartfelt and emotional. I love the part about hanging on every word :3

Posted 6 Years Ago


UnderCompulsion

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I appreciate your every comment :)
Carl Drake Barnard

6 Years Ago

Wow was taking a trip to memmory lane- :(
Those two verses were absolute I could see my self .. read more

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Added on March 25, 2013
Last Updated on March 25, 2013
Tags: love, different, true, way, world, rainstorm, dance, night, free, soul, eyes, dream

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UnderCompulsion
UnderCompulsion

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