Prazne riječi

Nedostaje mi melodija
Nedostaje me šapat,tihi šum
Slatkoća riječi koja će pokrenuti moj um
Da si�'e sa nevidljivog podija

Nedostaje mi riječ koja sadrži ključ
Da prodre u život,zapleteni puk
Da sruši rešetke što uzrokuju muk
I rasplete nevidljivi obruč

Nedostaje mi...Ne!Nedostupna je
Ta fraza,ta riječ,taj dar što zbori
Da natjera ljude,da sve se ori

Da,nedostupna mi je...
ljepota i skladnost napisane riječi
Jer nije dovoljno samo REČI!

Author's Note

I published this on my language,beacuse I have my reasons.I know almoust nobody will understand this but I had to do this.soo...

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Voljela sam to! :) Način razgovarati o glazbi, to je nevjerojatno!

[UnderCompulsion]

Haha don't use googel translate. It don't translate good. It can only make you sound funny...but thank you for trying and thank you for your review :))

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Haha ohh well :) but the poem was good i did read it and i loved it :)

[UnderCompulsion]

well thank you :)

[Blue Ivory]

OK, WOAH! You write so beautifully in Croatian! This is amazing, actually. I'm at a loss for words right now, so I don't know what to say right know, but I love this!

[Blue Ivory]

You have a poem I haven't seen yet??? Wait, I'm on my way to Google Translate.