Opaque Mirror: Two Shades Of Life

We spend a lot of time on this beautiful EARTH!! But at the end...some or the other things are left to be done!!

So many things,
Between sky and the ground,
So many incidents,
Happening all around.

The charming smiling faces,
Full of happiness and joy,
From a man winning deal,
To a baby who got his toy.

And the faces with frown,
Crying a loud rain,
Having heavy heart inside,
Full of sadness and pain.

The birds singing songs,
The flowers so pretty,
Spreading goodness in air,
Represents nature’s beauty.

The two shades of life,
Like the days and the night,
One with deep darkness,
And the other with bright light.

The relations that We hold,
Some true and some fake,
A few remains life long,
While the others set in life’s lake.

So many things,
Untouched and unknown,
So many incidents,
Left unfaced and unshown!!

Author's Note

I would you all to give your reviews on this...and to suggest a suitable title too!!

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"The relations that We hold,
Some true and some fake,
A few remains life long,
While the others set in life’s lake"....
beautiful lines....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

I'm glad that you liked it... :) thank you Sir for your valuable comments!!

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

wonderful writing a taste of beauty, wisdom and truth...very well expressed

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

ThankYou Sir !!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"two shades LIFE"
maybe......all i could think of.....
great poem!!!
loved it!!
:)

[Happy hours]

while reading the lines...I've come to "opaque mirror" as a title...the poem is beautiful...

[R Smith]

its certainly a beautiful poem Amulya, you touched the whole of life in this work and show its beauty, I would just call it Life, thanks for posting it here, just great :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

Yin-Yang is a Chinese philosophical term which means that two contrary forces are actually complementary and they give rise to each other as they interrelate with one another, Your poem seems to describe a similar meaning of there is no happiness without sadness and vice versa. Hence I would suggest 'Yin-Yang' as an apt title amulya:)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Wow!! :o thaankk you for the suggestion!! ^_^

[luvs2write]

I really enjoyed this one! Your words are very true and powerful....as for a title, i have to agree with Kuldeep desai...coin sounds very cool. =) Keep writing!

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thanks a lot!! Ur words make me delighted!! N yeah I too sgree... just looking for more suggestions!! ;)

[Kuldeep desai]

You have described two faces of life and the flow of your poem is carried out nicely....... The title I would suggest is Coin which also has two face like life....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank You Sir!! N I.think.its a good title.indeed!! :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Your always welcome..... Don't stop just write....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Hehe... I won't for sure... ^_^